More and more people suffer from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated by modern medicine. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine is warranted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of sick people caused by the new era's lifestyle has increased lately. Modern medical systems are proving to fail in treatment for some diseases,

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some people have the opinion that traditional cure has to be the best approach. I will present that a combination

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both methods will be perfect. First of all, prevention is the ultimate solution to avoid sickness. There are plenty of methods to prevent getting sick

such

as restricting junk food, having 30 minutes of physical

exercises

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everyday

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, and a green or balanced diet.

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there are

also

traditional ingredients that can be consumed as a daily drink or meal,

for instance

, the mixing between ginger and lemongrass. The oldsters said

this

mixture can help our

body

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stay warm.

Secondly

, modern drugs have a measurable safety portion

that is

safe for consumption.

Therefore

, before assigning a prescription doctor and pharmacist will measure our body composition and our symptoms

then

these adequate assumptions produce a credible drug's rule.

For example

, when a child gets

fever

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she needs to consume Paracetamol tablets 3 times a day. Guidelines for

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cure are evident, which old methods may not follow.

To conclude

, there is a regression

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people's health

due to

their new kind of lifestyle meanwhile modern treatments show failures to treat some

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of illness. The newest medicines provide an adequate measurement from doctor's opinions which help patients

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not having overdose,

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herbs or other natural products can be consumed in order to keep our bodies healthy.