Nowadays,
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social
media
sites
such
as Twitter or Facebook are believed by a number of
people
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disadvantages specifically
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generations and
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their interpersonal relationship capabilities.
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other parties suggest that these
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offer more benefits
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drawbacks in the community by meeting each person to each other in
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way.
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offers more advantages than
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disadvantages towards the young
generation
in the community with the ease of access to connect with
people
, and as a medium to express personal things, but the potential drawback is the human-trafficking.
One primary benefit of using social
media
such
as Facebook or Twitter is
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the ease of access to connect with a lot of
people
over vast
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. Where the youths are able to communicate with each other without
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on meeting in a traditional way
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as
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face
.
For example
, overseas university students can reach up to their supervisor through Facebook messenger if they want to know
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regarding their proposals without
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face
to
face
.
Another positive thing
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utilizing social
media
sites
by the young
generation
is that they can use these
sites
as a medium to express personal thoughts which
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to a diary so they can release or
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their
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. Take
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recent phenomenon as an example, where at present, there is
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number of young
people
expressing their days,
such
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. The young generations are able to release their
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by releasing
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abstract thoughts into written form of expression in the form of
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social
media
.
However
, there is a potential negative effect on the young
generation
in using these social
media
sites
,
such
as the
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. As the case,
if Correct word choice
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the young
generation
who
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more
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expressing themselves
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these online platforms
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to become a target for
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as their personal information
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known by the criminals.
In conclusion,
while
the utilization of certain social
media
platforms
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ease of access to connect with
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, and as a medium
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expressing personal thoughts,
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the fact that social
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negative effect
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cannot be overlooked.