Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

Making

trip

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to isolated places and society is becoming a new famous trend of travelling currently.

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it

gives

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a good economic impact

for

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the area and

people

, I

belive

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that it

brings

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many bad impacts on the village and the

community

such

as social and

environtmental

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environmental

issues. Creating a tour to far-flung places and

community

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communities

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might develop the economy of the

people

since the guests will spend lots of

money

in that

place

. By way of illustration,

Labuan

Bajo

, one of

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super premium tourist destinations in Indonesia, experiences high development on the

societies

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incomes because

of

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many tourists both regional and international come there and spend their

money

in the

place

to buy

souveniers

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souvenirs

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, food, and pay hotels. Those travelling activities make local

people

get more

money

everyday

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.

However

, even the tourism activities increase the local income, it brings

plethora

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a plethora

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of bad influences into the areas and societies that can be a

thread

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for

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future

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life

of the village and

people

. Making travel

package

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packages

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to remote

area

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areas

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and

community

could destroy their social

life

system and their

environtment

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environment

. If many new

people

with different background and

atitude

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attitude

come to the

the

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areas and society, it brings negative influences to the society

inn

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in

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terms of

life style

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lifestyle

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and

also

harm

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their nature. I take

Labuan

Bajo

again as proof, presently some

people

in

Labuan

Bajo

lose

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have lost

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their local

life style

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lifestyle

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in

a

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way how

to dressed

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up because of copying many

tourists

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tourists'

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style

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who come to the

place

, they started to think that wearing local clothes is not good anymore.

Moreover

, the high amount of flights and

people

coming to

Labuan

Bajo

, it is slowly but surely

change

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the temperature of the city because of more pollution created. In conclusion, even

thoght

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though

organizing

trip

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trips

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to visit

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a

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remote

village

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villages

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and

people

creates

a lots

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a lot

lots

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of opportunities for

the

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people

to get

money

and improve their quality of

life

;

however

, it creates lots of

disadvanteges

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disadvantages

for the surroundings. It will kill the social

life

and the nature of the

place

and the

community

.