Organized tours to remote places and communities are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

Management tour to rural places and community is rising significantly.
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this
development
can bring
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a detrimental effect on the environment, many
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impacts on the local citizens and environment on the grounds that they can boost
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the economic
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economic
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and get an opportunity
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language. On the one hand, when holiday-makers flog to a tourist attraction, they may ruin some places.
For example
, in Indonesia, many tourists have visited temples
such
as Borobudur
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,
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solen
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many stupas and
any
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other ancient things.
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also
happen
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in Thailand, many
tourist
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tourists
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who have explored sub-marine life, sometimes
have ruined
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many
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magnificent
creatures in the sea.
As a result
, our next generation may not
to
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be able to see these
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magnificent
things.
On the other hand
, many visitors who flog to the local places may grow
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the economic
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of the local
people
.
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, when tourists visit Bali, they can buy local food, use local transportation,
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and sleep
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in the local’s
house
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.
As a result
,
people
can receive much more money from tourists and
this
can boost local peoples’
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.
In addition
, the visitors not only bring impact on
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but
also
local
people
can learn new languages from travellers.
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this
can improve their relationship skills. In conclusion,
this
essay thinks that in spite of
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negative
effect
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on the place,
but
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they bring more positive impacts because they can increase local
people
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live
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economically and local citizens can learn new
language
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languages
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.
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