Some people rely to much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. What problems could this approach to Healthcare cause? How might they be solved?

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trust doctors

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they do not think about their own

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.And

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dependability can cause some serious problems.

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following essay will discuss the main issues and suggest some viable solutions. There is a wide range of drawbacks linked with relying

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doctor

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doctors

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,but one of the most obvious

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is related to increased Healthcare

costs

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.

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that

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is to say,if a great number of

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go to

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doctor's

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doctors

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,

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costs

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of treatment instruments and

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service

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will increase.

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,prived hospitals are very expensive in

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uzbekistan

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,but hospitals which are built by the

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are very cheap.the solution is for the

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to reduce

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costs

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of priced hospitals significantly,after that the

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must not take huge amounts of taxes from priced ones. Another problem is that

people

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these days do not have the patience to take care of their own

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and depend on medication for everything.Most

people

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do

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not aware of home remedies .

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cough is common,

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time

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prefer

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apply

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medicine

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medicines

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which have got chemical composition

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as cough syrup rather than

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hot milk or hot water.

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all

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medicine

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medicines

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are beneficial.

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example

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due to

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Dt Mack 1

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,

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113 children

died

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year.

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is because

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do not know about

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. To tackle

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problem garment must open

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course and everyone should read it for their

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. In conclusion, increasing

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care

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and some

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medicine

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are not useful have

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serious problems.

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,

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situation could be solved by

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government

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the government

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