Some people rely to much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. What problems could this approach to Healthcare cause? How might they be solved?

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trust doctors

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but

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they do not think about their own

health

.And

this

dependability can cause some serious problems.

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following essay will discuss the main issues and suggest some viable solutions. There is a wide range of drawbacks linked with relying

to

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on

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doctor

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doctors

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,but one of the most obvious

issue

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issues

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is related to increased Healthcare

costs

.

that

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is to say,if a great number of

people

go to

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doctor's

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doctors

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,

bosh

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the

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costs

of treatment instruments and

health

service

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services

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will increase.

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,prived hospitals are very expensive in

the

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uzbekistan

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Uzbekistan

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,but hospitals which are built by the

government

are very cheap.the solution is for the

government

to reduce

costs

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the costs

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of priced hospitals significantly,after that the

government

must not take huge amounts of taxes from priced ones. Another problem is that

people

these days do not have the patience to take care of their own

health

and depend on medication for everything.Most

people

do

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not aware of home remedies .

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example

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cough is common,

this

time

people

prefer

to

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apply

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medicine

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medicines

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which have got chemical composition

such

as cough syrup rather than

drink

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drinking

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hot milk or hot water.

not

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all

medicine

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medicines

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are beneficial.

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example

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due to

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medicine

,

113childer

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113 children

died

last

year.

this

is because

people

do not know about

medicine

. To tackle

this

problem garment must open

medical

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a medical

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course and everyone should read it for their

health

. In conclusion, increasing

health

care

costs

and some

medicine

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medicines

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are not useful have

became

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become

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serious problems.

However

,

this

situation could be solved by

government

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the government

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.