The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration below depicts the production of

yogurt

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and the intricate procedure involved in making it.

Overall

, the making of

this

milk

product

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apply

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seven steps. It starts

from

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heating the milk and ends by transporting it through a truck.

Firstly

, the milk is heated

upto

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up to

90 degree

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celsius

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for a period of thirty minutes and

this

time can be increased as it directly correlates with adding extra thickness to the

yogurt

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Following

this

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this,

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the hot dairy

product

is cooled off to a temperature of 44

degree

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degrees

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celsius

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Celsius

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After

this

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this,

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a sachet of live bacteria is emptied into the container and the temperature is pulled down 7

degree

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degrees

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than

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former

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the former

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value and kept as it is for the next four hours. The fifth step involves keeping the

product

in the refrigerator, after which

strawberry

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strawberries

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and sugar are added

into

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it.

Lastly

, the final

product

is filled in multiple

cup sized

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cup-sized

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yogurt

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yoghurt

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containers, before being

tranported

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transported

by a truck.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

159 words

4.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays many mothers take care of the family and don’t go out to work. Some people believe they should be given salaries by the government. 🔸Do you agree or disagree?

Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports starts are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?