The diagram below shows the steps in the process of manufacturing yogurt. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustration below depicts the production of

yogurt

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and the intricate procedure involved in making it.

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, the making of

this

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milk

product

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apply

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seven steps. It starts

from

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heating the milk and ends by transporting it through a truck.

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, the milk is heated

upto

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up to

90 degree

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90-degree

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celsius

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for a period of thirty minutes and

this

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time can be increased as it directly correlates with adding extra thickness to the

yogurt

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Following

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this

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this,

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the hot dairy

product

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is cooled off to a temperature of 44

degree

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degrees

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celsius

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Celsius

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After

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this

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this,

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a sachet of live bacteria is emptied into the container and the temperature is pulled down 7

degree

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degrees

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than

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former

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the former

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value and kept as it is for the next four hours. The fifth step involves keeping the

product

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in the refrigerator, after which

strawberry

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strawberries

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and sugar are added

into

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it.

Lastly

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, the final

product

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is filled in multiple

cup sized

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cup-sized

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yogurt

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yoghurt

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containers, before being

tranported

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transported

by a truck.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words product with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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