There is an annual work party next month, which is held every year. Write a letter to your colleagues to co-arrange the party. In your letter: •Say what would you do differently than last year • Say what you think were some of the things not so good last year • Suggest where to meet to plan for the party.
Dear Miss. Kaur,
Greeting
of the day!
Through Fix the agreement mistake
Greetings
this
missive, I would like to discuss about
my opinion related to the work event, which is held on Remove the preposition
apply
upcoming
Add an article
the upcoming
year
.
The main point of writing this
letter is to describe the new activity which we are going to add next year
. We are planning to play musical chair
Fix the agreement mistake
chairs
in
the party which we did not Change preposition
at
played
Change the verb form
play
last
year
, due to
this
people will enjoy and
Correct pronoun usage
themselves and
also
forget the work stress.
Last
year
party
was up to the mark but, the decoration was not satisfactory, Correct article usage
the party
staff
expected a lot from us Correct article usage
the staff
however
, next year
we will arrange some
new interior designer to Change preposition
for some
bauble
the hall.
Could you please meet me in the coffee shop which is near the admin office at 5 pm, Correct your spelling
build
In addition
to
, we can arrange and discuss Change preposition
apply
further
related to the function. I will see you soon at coffee
shop.
Yours sincerely,
JyotiAdd an article
the coffee
a coffee
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Ensure that all the required information and tasks from the prompt are addressed in your letter.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure of your letter, making sure that the ideas flow smoothly and are well organized.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more varied and precise words to enhance your writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to your grammar and sentence structure, ensuring that there are no errors.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite