The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts illustrate the changes in percentages of households owning electrical appliances,
as well as
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the time invested weekly in housework in a specific nation between 1920 and 2019. All in all, the
ownership
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of all three types of electrical facilities witnessed an upward trend
while
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both refrigerators and vacuum cleaners reached a hundred per cent
ownership
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in 2000. Meanwhile, the average hours spent on housework have dropped significantly in the periods given. To commence, there was merely less than 10%
ownership
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of refrigerators in 1920, which have surged dramatically to 100% and have become ubiquitous in the neighbourhood since 1980. Twenty years later, in 2000, vacuum cleaners have
also
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reached 100%, turning into a necessity for every family.
On the other hand
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, the
ownership
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of washing machines has fluctuated between 60% and 75% since the year 1940. Regarding the time invested in housework per week, it has decreased substantially to nearly 10 hours in 2019, which is the fifth of the amount in 1920.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ownership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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