In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the

future

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all vehicles will be

driverless

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, and there only

passengers

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inside these cars. I believe the advantages of

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scheme outweigh

those

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downside

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downsides

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ones

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due to

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their active working. On the one hand, undoubtedly

that

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the

introduce

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introduction of

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driverless

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vehicles will replace

the

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traditional

drivers

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their jobs. Hundreds, if not thousands of people

are now work

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as commercial or public transposition

drivers

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, once these autonomous are employed, human

drivers

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will be redundant.

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cause

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them

spend

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more time finding a new job to make a living, which is not

intersting

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interesting

to those in

middle-age

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, I believe

drivers

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, with many years of experience, might acknowledge the structure and operation of the vehicles,

can

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and can

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choose to step behind the driving progress to work as a

merchanic

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mechanic

for

mantaining

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maintaining

services,

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and reparing

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reparing

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repairing

preparing

these

automotives

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automobiles

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, the

replacing

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scheme of

traditonal

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traditional

drivers

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offers

a more frequent journeys

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a more frequent journey

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not to mention

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the

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long journeys, than ever before. Since driving will be under artificial

intellegence

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intelligence

control, it will not have physical

constrains

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constraints

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like human being

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stand

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a chance of being more

effecient

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efficient

. Take commercial

drivers

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in Vietnam,

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, these people usually have to take a North-South trip to transfer products.

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this

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type of

driving

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driving,

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trip requires

serveral

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several

conditions

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for

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drivers

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such

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as staying awake

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long periods of time, if they want to minimise the

duaration

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duration

of the trips, and

remaning

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remaining

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good health as well.

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cannot be the case sometimes, as a human

being

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beings

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flu all the time,

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also

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means they do not work without

interrupt

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interruption

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driverless

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cars will make

this

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comes

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true. The

transferring

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will be

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faster and denser in the future. In conclusion, all cars even personal or commercial ones will be

driverless

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in the future,

although

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this

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can cause the old

drivers

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face

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a scenario of

loosing

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losing

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their jobs, I firmly assert that the working flow will be smoother and more

effecient

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efficient

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coherence cohesion

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coherence cohesion

You should include a conclusion that summarizes your main points and restates your opinion.

task achievement

Your ideas are mostly relevant to the topic, but you should try to provide more specific examples or evidence to support your points.

coherence cohesion

Your essay demonstrates a good level of coherence and cohesion with clear progression of ideas and appropriate use of linking devices.

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grammatical range

You have some errors in your grammar, including verb tense and word order. Proofread your essay carefully to correct these errors.

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Sentence 1 - Background statement
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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

333 words

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

in many countries, people live longer and longer. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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