The diagrams below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart represents information about the most
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pupolar
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popular
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modes of transport in
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Europe
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that people were used to travelling to
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to work in 1950,1970 and 1990.
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seen that in 1950 and 1990 the highest were foot and car respectively. And the proportion in 1970 was not much
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1950,
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most
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people
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used foot at 39
percent
. Followed by bike and bus at 29
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and 19
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respectively. But the lowest in
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at only 5 %.
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, in 1990, the highest was car at 38
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.Followed by bus was 16
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.
However
, foot and bike were only 7% and 5% respectively. In 1970. the highest of
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transportation
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at 26
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, and all
mode
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of transport
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less than 30
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • modes of transport
  • travellers
  • European country
  • 1950
  • 1990
  • summarise
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • popularity
  • time periods
  • bicycle
  • walking
  • car
  • public transportation
  • motorcycle
  • increased significantly
  • preferred mode of transport
  • stability
  • slight increase
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