The diagrams below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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popular
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that people were used to travelling to Correct your spelling
Europe
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to work in 1950,1970 and 1990.
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seen that in 1950 and 1990 the highest were foot and car respectively. And the proportion in 1970 was not much Correct your spelling
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differently
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used foot at 39 Unnecessary verb
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. Followed by bike and bus at 29 percent
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, in 1990, the highest was car at 38 percent
.Followed by bus was 16 percent
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However
, foot and bike were only 7% and 5% respectively.
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transportation
bus
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a bus
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