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Will English Remain A Global Language Despite Globalisation? Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalisation?

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What are the benefits of studying in the UK compared to your home country or USA/Canada/Australia etc.? -
UK
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 is
global
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a global
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 leader in research and education. It provides cheaper accommodation,
better
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a better
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life style
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lifestyle
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, innovative ideas and skill development and mostly accepted gap years during study and work.  Why did you choose
this
University
/College? -
This
university
welcome
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welcomes
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 international students
more
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from more
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 than 140 countries.
Moreover
,
this
university
 provides high-quality teaching and internationally recognised
research based
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.
Additionally
,
this
university
 has been awarded 5 stars in the QS
Starts
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University
 Ratings in 2021. The
class room
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classroom
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 size is very small as compared to other universities because
this
university
believe
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provide
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in providing
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 good knowledge rather than just
fill
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filling
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 their
class rooms
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classrooms
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.
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