The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph chart compares the amount of nitrogen oxide released from four types of cars. Units used here are in grams per
kilometer
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kilometre
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and kilometres per hour, respectively.
Overall
,
it is clear that
buses and lorries eject more amount of nitrogen oxide,
in contrast
to diesel and petrol cars.
Moreover
, buses and lorries emission of
this
gas depend upon their speed. With regard to buses, it create 40
g
/
km
of toxic gas at the minimum speed (10
kph
), with a gradual decrease of emissions
finally
reaches to
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its lowest (around 25
g
/
km
) at 60
kph
of speed.
However
, the output increases gradually as the speed goes up and
finally
reaches its threshold at about 42%
in
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130
kph
speed.
Likewise
,
on the other hand
, for lorries, the exhaust starts from approximately 33
g
/
km
at 10
kph
,
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but goes down gradually up to its lowest, which is roughly 16
g
/
km
at 90
kph
. Later, it again climbs slowly and reaches 25
g
/
km
at the maximum speed mentioned in the graph. The release from petrol and diesel cars starts from around 10 and 6
g
/
km
, respectively and remains almost equal except for
a
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very
little
Correct quantifier usage
few
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fluctuations based on the velocity.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words g, km, kph with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "goes up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • nitrogen oxide emissions
  • vehicles
  • grams per kilometer
  • car
  • motorcycle
  • bus
  • truck
  • highest amount
  • lowest amount
  • produces
  • emits
  • same amount
  • overall
  • emissions
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