You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment

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Dear Adam How are you? How is your study? How are your family members? I hope you are okay. The

last

time we spoke, I mentioned that I wanted to visit your city.

Then

I thought I could not go there. But my aspiration has come true and on

business

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I will visit your city in the coming days. A meeting of students of our faculty will take place soon and I am the organizer of the engagement. I remember you told me that your city has many historical and modern places. I really need your help with choosing a place for a party and an overnight stay.

Besides

you, I have no friends in

this

area. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I look forward to hearing from you! Yours faithfully, Mia Parker

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task response

Include more specific details about the meeting and why you are visiting the town.

coherence and cohesion

Organize the ideas in separate paragraphs to improve coherence.

lexical resource

Expand your vocabulary and use more varied expressions.

grammatical range

Use more complex sentence structures to showcase grammatical range.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

139 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to inform you that
I am excited to announce that
I have decided to visit the town where you went to university because
I have always been curious about the town, and I thought it would be a great opportunity to explore it
I have booked a room at a hotel called
I will be staying in the town from
I am wondering if you could recommend any
fun activities
entertainment options
popular places to visit
restaurants
bars
clubs
concert venues
I am particularly interested in
local live music performances
cultural events
art galleries
theater shows
I would greatly appreciate your suggestions
Thank you in advance for your help
I am looking forward to hearing from you

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