A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to ur friend and in your letter: . Give details of course you took at university . Explain why you recommend the university . Give some advice about how to apply.

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Dear Sophia I hope

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studied at University . Histopathology

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. In Theory session you will learn the features of diseases on the biopsy and more information about disease and how investigate it The practical session About modern devices and how operate it .

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and interesting to study it As you know ,I graduated from University of Khartoum ,which Has highly ranks Positions on Universal and Arabic list of good Universities

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excellent performance on your study Best Luck

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbour complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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