today,fashion is becoming more and more important in choosing clothes.What are the reasons?Do you think the trend is positive or negative?

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Make sure to address all parts of the essay prompt and provide a clear stance on the topic.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your ideas in a clear and coherent manner, with a proper introduction and conclusion.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fashionable
  • Trendy
  • Style
  • Preference
  • Aesthetics
  • Self-expression
  • Identity
  • Social pressure
  • Conformity
  • Media influence
  • Celebrities
  • Self-confidence
  • Economic growth
  • Consumerism
  • Sustainable fashion
  • Fast fashion
  • Environmental degradation
  • Positive aspects
  • Negative aspects
  • Opinion
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