The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph and the table provide information about the monthly breakdown of temperature
as well as
annual hours of sunshine in three different countries.
Overall
, both countries experienced a different trend of climate throughout the month. Although
, the climate in Sydney was high initially
, however
, it still remained high in the last
month which was higher than in the other nations. Moreover
, the overall
number of hours of sunshine per year in New York
was higher than in the other states while
London recorded the least.
To begin
with, the condition in Sydney stood at 25, nevertheless
, the figure witnessed a gradual decline to about 16 in July until it reached a peak of 25 in December which was almost the same in January. Both London and New York
did not show much differences in their trend. They recorded about 7 and just below 5 respectively in January, by contrast
, their figure experienced a significant growth of about 24 and 30. Surprisingly, New York
recorded the highest condition in the middle of the month.
By stark contrast, 2,533 annual hours of sunshine were spent in New York
. The number was higher the the other country. London recorded 1,180 while
Sydney had 2,473 which was the second-highest recorded.Submitted by mboadi211 on
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