The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph and the table provide information about the monthly breakdown of temperature
as well as
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annual hours of sunshine in three different countries.
Overall
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, both countries experienced a different trend of climate throughout the month.
Although
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, the climate in Sydney was high
initially
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,
however
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, it still remained high in the
last
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month which was higher than in the other nations.
Moreover
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, the
overall
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number of hours of sunshine per year in New
York
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was higher than in the other states
while
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London recorded the least.
To begin
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with, the condition in Sydney stood at 25,
nevertheless
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, the figure witnessed a gradual decline to about 16 in July until it reached a peak of 25 in December which was almost the same in January. Both London and New
York
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did not show much differences in their trend. They recorded about 7 and just below 5 respectively in January,
by contrast
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, their figure experienced a significant growth of about 24 and 30. Surprisingly, New
York
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recorded the highest condition in the middle of the month. By stark contrast, 2,533 annual hours of sunshine were spent in New
York
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. The number was higher the the other country. London recorded 1,180
while
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Sydney had 2,473 which was the second-highest recorded.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words york with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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