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The charts show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts presented in the visual display the data on the modes of
transportation
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 utilized by students for commuting to the university over a five-year time frame, ranging from 2004 to 2009. In general, except for the
car
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, all other means of
transportation
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 witnessed a noticeable increase in usage.
Car
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 was the most preferred mode of travel in 2004, but by 2009, it was replaced by bus as the most commonly used method.
Nevertheless
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train
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the train
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 continued to be the least popular way of commuting to the university in both periods.
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Car
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The car
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 represented the highest percentage share of all modes of
transportation
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 in 2004, accounting for 51%.
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, over the five-year time period, the percentage decreased drastically by almost half to 28% in 2009.
Conversely
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bus
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the bus
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 emerged as the most popular mode of
transportation
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 in 2009, registering a remarkable rise from 33% to 46% during the five-year period.
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, the use of
bicycle
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bicycles
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 and walking
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 experienced a moderate increase in popularity, going from 9% and 4% in 2004 to 16% and 6%, respectively, in 2009.
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,
train
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the train
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 remained the least preferred mode of
transportation
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, holding only 3% of all methods in 2004 and 4% in 2009.
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, the data presented in the pie charts suggest that bus
transportation
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 has become increasingly popular among students over the five-year period, leading to a decline in
car
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 travel.
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,
while
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 walking and cycling were moderately popular, the train remained the least preferred method of commuting to the university in both periods.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, nevertheless".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuters
  • sustainable
  • modes of transportation
  • shifts
  • public transport
  • personal vehicles
  • urban commuting
  • environmental awareness
  • economic factors
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • percentage
  • trends
  • stability
  • preference
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