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the chart below shows the main reasons for study among students of different age groups

the chart below shows the main reasons for study among students of different age groups
#study #students #age #groups
The given bar chart
illustrate
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 the percentage of
students
 who choose two main reasons to
study
 in 5
age
 groups.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a large
disaparity
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disparity
 in two reasons
of
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for
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 studying with
career
 reason outnumbered
interest
 from under 26 to 39 years old.
Additionally
, as the people got older, the was a change from studying for
career
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a career
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 to
interest
.
Reagarding
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Regarding
to
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the
age
of
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group which studying mainly for
career
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a career
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. In terms of the
age
 group under 26 to 29, people who
study
 to build
the
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career
 made up over 80 % of
students
while
 just about a modest minority of 10%
students
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of students
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who
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apply
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study
 for
interest
purpose
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purposes
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. Meanwhile,
in
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at
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 the
age
 of 30 – 39 , over
a
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half of
students
study
 for
career
goal
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goals
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 which
three
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is three
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time
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times
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 more than
students
 who
study
 because of
interest
. Turning to the remaining groups of
age
 which saw the studying reasons reversed. As for the
age
 from 40- 49, there was
a
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an
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 equal between two
purpose
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purposes
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 of studying at exactly 40% of
students
.
At
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 the meantime,
in
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at
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 the
age
 over 49
where
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who
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 had a switch from studying mostly for
career
 to
interest
, there was about
approximatly
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approximately
 at nearly
three quarter
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three-quarter
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 of
students
 which four
time
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times
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 more than
students
 who
study
 for
interest
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, study, age, career, interest with synonyms.
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