In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a possitive or a negative development?
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excercise
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exercise
classes
or playing games. In this
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offers
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such
as increasing confidence level and taking personal guidance fastly
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some fruitful benefits to the individual. Fix the infinitive
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individuals
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gain
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For instance
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women are fit and fine as they look at their own teacher who gives more guidance and facility about their work. Change preposition
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Hence
, crowd
believe that taking personal Correct article usage
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classes
would be beneficial for them.
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from the
tutors can provide Correct article usage
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time
management and efficiency to the
humankind. personal Correct article usage
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classes
provide sufficient
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time
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classes
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time
if they want a special time
for particular classes
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the
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time
management and they can ask any doubt from the tutors without any hesitation.
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benefit
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benefits
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Therefore
, if people take personal classes
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