In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a possitive or a negative development?

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exercise
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of benefits
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some fruitful benefits to the individual.
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prefer personal
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enormous knowledge
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expert guidance and instruction.
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women are fit and fine as they look at their own teacher who gives more guidance and facility about their work.
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believe that taking personal
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humankind. personal
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if they want a special
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prefer personal
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because that would be
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management and they can ask any doubt from the tutors without any hesitation.
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class from the instructor
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provides a lot of
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to
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mankind.
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upgraded for every people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personal fitness trainer
  • playing sports
  • exercise classes
  • individualized
  • motivation
  • accountability
  • expert guidance
  • injury prevention
  • safety
  • efficiency
  • time management
  • results
  • progress tracking
  • professional equipment
  • social aspect
  • networking
  • higher cost
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