A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Thomas,
I am requesting to join your museum as a volunteer in the next month.
Let me introduce myself I have been living in
this
area for more than 10 years. I am looking forward for
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to
a part-time work
because I am interested in the history subject and I have knowledge about historical events. When I saw a brochure on the main wall of the museum I suddenly Remove the article
part-time work
a part-time job
write
a letter Wrong verb form
wrote
for
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about
this
job.
Basically, my profession is journalist
and covering the historical data for Replace the word
journalism
past
5 years. Correct article usage
the past
Besides
this
, local newspaper
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newspapers
are
covered my history articles and publishing. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, I have experienced for
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apply
one year
internship as a volunteer person at my office so I suppose it will help Add a hyphen
one-year
for
the temporary services.
Availability of my work would be in the next month so I can join in the October. Change preposition
with
Although
, the busy schedule I am writing an important article which will publish on the 30th September after that I am free for par-time
work.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,Correct your spelling
part-time
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