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Band 4.5

A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Thomas, I am requesting to join your museum as a volunteer in the next month. Let me introduce myself I have been living in
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 area for more than 10 years. I am looking forward
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a part-time work
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part-time work
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 because I am interested in the history subject and I have knowledge about historical events. When I saw a brochure on the main wall of the museum I suddenly
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 a letter
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this
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 job. Basically, my profession is
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 and covering the historical data for
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 5 years.
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, local
newspaper
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are
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covered my history articles and publishing.
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, I have experienced
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one year
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 internship as a volunteer person at my office so I suppose it will help
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 the temporary services. Availability of my work would be in the next month so I can join in the October.
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, the busy schedule I am writing an important article which will publish on the 30th September after that I am free for
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 work. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

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task response
Ensure that you fully address all the points mentioned in the task prompt.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into clear and cohesive paragraphs.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to convey your ideas more effectively.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve the clarity of your writing.
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