the chart below shows the different levels of post-schools qualifications in Australia and the porportion of men and wemen who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
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The following bar chart compares various levels of post-school qualifications in both genders during 1999 in Australia.
Overall
, most men were qualified in
vocational Change preposition
with
diploma
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diplomas
while
the highest percentage of women were educated in
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with
undergraduate
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an undergraduate
diploma
.
A striking difference
between the percentage rate was noticed in vocational diploma
among males and females, reaching almost 100% and just above 10% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
diplomas
Similarly
, the education apon
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upon
postgraduate
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the postgraduate
diploma
and master's degree
followed the same trend, as men had the highest proportion (70%). The same pattern was followed by master's degree
, but with Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
much
bigger Add an article
a much
difference
between male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
, 60% and 40% respectively.
In undergraduate Fix the agreement mistake
females
diploma
and bachelor's degree
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degrees
however
women seemed to be educated twice as % men, 70% and 35%. In bachelor's Add a comma
however,
degree
meanwhile, it
had the smallest Correct pronoun usage
apply
difference
from all other post-school qualification
, regarding Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
to
gender types, as the Remove the preposition
apply
difference
was less than %, with female
reaching well above 50%.Fix the agreement mistake
females
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