Development in technology has brought various enviornmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is indeed true that nowadays,
people
are
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face too
many
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environmental
pollution
for
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modern
technology
. Some
nation
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believe
,
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we should
to leves
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live
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to simple life which is
solve
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to solve
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environmental
problem
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problems
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. Others believe that
scients
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scientists
can solve the
problem
. In my opinion,
tecnology
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technology
can solve the
problem
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compared
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to simpler lives. On the one hand, It is admittedly true that day by day,
technology
has become the main
resone
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reason
for environmental
pollution
such
as air
pollutionpollution
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pollution pollution
, water
pollutionpollution
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pollution pollution
so on. The main
reson
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reason
of
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for
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air
pollutionpollution
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pollution pollution
for commuting individuals which is necessary for
this
modern time.
People
can not stop
to
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apply
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the
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apply
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air-
pollution
and if
people
live to simpler
which
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is
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it
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can not help
to
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our community
for
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with
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environmental
pollution
.
Moreover
,They can be aware of
pollution
and they can try to plant trees to recover air.
People
avoide
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avoid
to use
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using
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plastic
bag
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bags
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to
instanc
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instant
paper
bag
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bags
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or others.
As a result
,
individual
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individuals
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can solve some of
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the problem
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problem
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problems
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but most of
pollution
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the pollution
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problem
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problems
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can
solve
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be solved
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technology
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by technology
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.
On the other hand
, Some individuals believe that
technology
is the best way to prevent our environmental problems and I agree
whit
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with
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this
statement.
However
,
plastic
and glass are very demandable and
people
are use
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are using
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more which is one
reson
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reason
to
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for
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environmental
pollution
.
Technology
can recycle
plastic
and glass and it
is helps
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helps
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to
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apply
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our environment.
Technology
can
autometic
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automatic
solve many
problem
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problems
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such
as
plastic
recycel
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recycle
and
also
it is too much faster.
To sum up
,
It is
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deems
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seems
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to me that modern
scients
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scientists
can solve our environmental problems easily. Normal
citizen
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citizens
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can
carfull
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care
about
pollution
but it is difficult
to
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for to
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solve environmental for them.
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