The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.

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The table represents the difficulties faced by juveniles in two different primary education

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, school A seems to have more problems when compared to school B in both years

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The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015.

Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

Some people believe that eventually all the jobs will be done by artificial intelligence. What is your opinion?

With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

The number of indigenous tribes living traditional lives in the world’s rainforests is decreasing. Within a few decades the last of these indigenous tribes may have disappeared forever. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.