Some people believe that only employees who have worked at a company for a long time deserve to be promoted to a higher position. What is your opinion about this?

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company

the main goal is to not stay

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the same position, there is

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for growth and

also

getting a higher salary. It is debatable that to be promoted at a

company

one

needs to be working for them for a long time. I disagree with

this

,

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because I feel that you just need the right knowledge .

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essay is going to bring out my opinion on the matter. To a greater extent, I strongly disagree with those who believe they need to stay with the organisation for

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a number of years to get promoted,

that is

not the case, for an individual to get a raise it means, there is a change on the quality of work that they are doing or someone keeps improving on how they are handling their daily duties and understanding what is needed,

for example

one

needs to know how to achieve goals in a timely manner There is

also

need

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to evaluate a

person

's qualifications,

for

example

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some people have

honours

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an honours

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degree whilst others only have

undergraduate

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an undergraduate

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degree

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,

this

means the

one

with the high level of education needs to be promoted regardless of the time they worked with the

company

, for it is believed knowledge is the key

However

,

besides

being qualified there is

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to evaluate a

person

as a whole,

thus

the attitude and behaviour. The two

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hand in hand , and

one

must show that they have the best interest of the business at heart.

Also

, they need to show signs that they are fair and selfless

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contrast

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I will

also

not ignore the fact that being with the

company

for a long time is a bonus, as

one

will know every rule and what is expected. There are

routine

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that are usually followed that can easily be ignored by a new

person

To sum up

, I would say,

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best

person

with the right knowledge and ideas, those with

growth

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a growth

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mindset should be promoted