You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given picture
delineate
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delineates
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the information regarding the structure of the solar
panels
and how
this
can be used. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that solar
panels
can be used for heating the
air
as well as
water
,
however
, the structure for heating both of them is a little bit different. Solar
panels
is
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are
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the
box
which contains a transparent sheet on
it's
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its
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top and two openings, one is an inlet and
other
Correct article usage
the other
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one is an outlet. Solar
panels
uses
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use
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sunlight as the heat energy to warm up the
air
. Cool
air
enters the
box
with the help of an inlet and when sunlight falls on the transparent wall of the
box
,
this
helps in warming up the
air
.
This
hot
air
will be transferred with the help of an outlet.
On the other hand
, solar
panels
which are
use
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used
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for heating
the
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apply
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water
have some different
technique
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techniques
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. When
water
is entered
in
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into
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the solar
panels
by an inlet, it will enter directly into the
water
pipe, which is present inside the
box
. When
top
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the top
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of the
box
receives heat energy in the form of sun rays,
this
will help
heating
Wrong verb form
heat
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the
water
.
This
warmish
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warm
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water
will be released from an outlet.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words panels, air, water, box with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • solar panels
  • structure
  • components
  • function
  • diagrams
  • photovoltaic cells
  • electricity
  • sunlight
  • conduction
  • convection
  • radiation
  • comparison
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