In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views

In some

countries

, people earn higher

salaries

and think good for their own

country

and themselves, and

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in another

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another

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another country

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countries

they contend

it

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apply

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and believe that equal

salaries

to

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for

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every

citizens

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citizen

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. Some people are born with

talent

and become a working hard

person

. if the

person

can get

higher

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a higher

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salary

compare

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to

other

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another person

other people

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person

who are not that

much

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talent

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talented

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or working hard

person

,

then

it impacts

on

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apply

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those who are

talent

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talented

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and working hard. If talented and

working hard

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hard-working

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person

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people

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get higher

salaries

,

then

they can contribute to

countries

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the country's

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economic growth and investment.

One

countries

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country's

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economic growth and investment

is

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are

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important to control its unemployment rate, foreign and infrastructure investment,

monetary

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and monetary

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policy. Brain drain is a term meaning

one

countries

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country's

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talent

leaves its motherland to seek

job

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a job

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or bright future in another appealing

country

. If a

country

offers a good salary and opportunities

then

they remain their beloved nation to contribute their talents. So, in

this

way

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one

country

can retain its talents.

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, individual freedom is

right

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the right

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to

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of

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every

person

and merit evaluation is the key

for

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to

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anyone

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anyone's

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success, so

evaluate

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someone properly could do best for that

person

and for

this

country

. And

this

way

one

can become an entrepreneur.

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, if in a company few people get high

salaries

and

and

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most of the

stuff

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staff

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get lower

salaries

then

it creates income inequality and social divide and

this

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a

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detrimental effect on workforce motivation. For

an

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example, if a company team has three to five members, and their income is not

same

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the same

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,

then

there is a few

problem

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arises

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that arises

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like team support, working more or less, and points of responsibility. And, even sometimes they

involve

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in arguments which is negative in

working

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the working

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environment. In conclusion, the dream of

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an eglatarian

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eglatarian

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egalitarian

society is difficult to achieve, because if there is no value of talents, merits and even freedom of income,

then

one

country

will not

get

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achieve

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economic success.