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Topic: robots and AI technology are increasing being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, AI and robots have more developing and are being applied for teaching online.
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 trend brings a number of advantages for improving the learning experience, there are many drawbacks to
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 trend which may affect learners' experience. On the one hand, AI tools can help
students
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 enhance their learning by providing rapid feedback.
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, an AI system can review an assignment within a minute,
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 teachers often need much more time
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 the large number of
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 they have to assess.
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 immediate feedback allows learners to quickly identify their mistakes and correct them.
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,
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 can save time and practise more efficiently, which may accelerate their progress.
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, the new learner may find it difficult to follow if they just have support from the AI
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 of the real teacher , who can take care and follow based on the student's ability and give advice
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 more realistic. The presence of a teacher can make
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 feel supported and cared for, which may increase their motivation and engagement.
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, AI lacks emotional intelligence and may not fully respond to
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’ psychological needs. In conclusion,
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 AI and robots offer fast feedback and convenience in online learning, they cannot completely replace human teachers. A balanced combination of technology and human guidance may be the most effective approach to enhance
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’ learning experience.

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task response
Be clear on your view. The question asks if AI in online education is mostly good or bad. State your stance in the introduction and keep it in the rest of the essay. Add 1-2 strong ideas with reasons tied to learning outcomes.
coherence and cohesion
Add more detail to each point. Explain how feedback from AI helps or harms learning, and give more concrete examples like time saved, motivation, or privacy issues. Keep ideas connected to your main claim.
language
Improve grammar and word choice. Use simpler phrases and correct mistakes (for example 'are developing' -> 'are developing' or 'have developed'). Aim for accuracy and clear meaning.
organization
Structure is clear: introduction, body paragraphs with 'On the one hand/On the other hand', and a conclusion.
content
The essay gives a concrete example of AI feedback speed, showing understanding of topic.
evaluation
Balanced view with both sides discussed, ending with a call for balance.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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