The diagrams below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates how tourists chose means of transportation in European

city

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cities

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between 1950 and 1990.

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, there was a decline in the proportion of travellers using

bus

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buses

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bike

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bikes

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foot

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and foot

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while

the figure for

car

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cars

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witnessed the most considerable growth to become the most popular form of transportation in the final year. The percentage of tourists

chose

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who chose

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bus

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the bus

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started at about 18%, after which it saw a moderate increase to 26% in the next twenty years, before ending the period at 16%. Opposite changes can be seen in the figure for

car

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cars

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which experienced a fivefold rise, from exactly 5% to 25% in the first twenty years, reaching a peak of approximately 39% in 1970. About 28% of travellers used

bike

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a bike

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in 1950, with a gradual decrease to about 21% twenty years later, and hitting a trough of exactly 5% at the end of the period.

Similarly

, the figure for tourists

travelled

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travelling

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on foot saw a twofold decline, from 40% to roughly 28% between 1950 and 1970,

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by a significant decline to about 7% in the

last

year of the period.

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