The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean islan between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors
in
touring a Caribbean Change preposition
apply
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the sum of tourists has seen a huge increase. People preferred either staying on the Linking Words
island
or the cruise ship and the demand for cruise ships has Use synonyms
raised
over the years.
It is clear from the chart that, the Verb problem
risen
visitors
Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
have
increased throughout the span of 7 years. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Linking Words
Initially
in 2010, only 1 Add a comma
Initially,
million
people made it to the Use synonyms
island
and it kept going up till 2015 Use synonyms
where
Correct word choice
when
is
plateaued for a Correct your spelling
it
while
Linking Words
and
Correct word choice
apply
then
in 2016 the population of Linking Words
the
travellers sky-rocketed.
In 2010, journeyers chose Correct article usage
apply
staying
on the land and these numbers kept climbing till 2013 and stayed the sameChange the verb form
to stay
2
more years followed by a sudden dip in 2016, the count falling from 1.5 Change preposition
for 2
million
to 1.25 Use synonyms
million
and in 2017 the values picked up and Use synonyms
bacame
1.5 Correct your spelling
became
million
again.Use synonyms
On the other hand
, cruise ships Linking Words
was
less desired and the number kept fluctuating between 2010 and 2012.Change the verb form
were
However
, from 2012 the Linking Words
passengers
kept expanding and even overtook the number of visitors staying Correct quantifier usage
number of passengers
in
Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
island
in 2016, reaching 2 Add an article
the island
an island
million
in 2017.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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