The table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features, and make any relevant comparisons.

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Personal income in seven countries is denoted in the chart as a percentage of individual remuneration in 1970 1990 and 2000. France, Germany, Italy and Japan showed the highest accumulation compared to

Canada

, the UK and the USA in 1970. In 1970 and 1990 Italy had the highest hoard rate of 29.5% and 17.6%.

Also

Canada

showed 5.6% savings in 1970

however

it increased to 11.5% in 1990. By 2000 the holding rates can be seen at the same level considerably across the seven countries. France and Japan led with 13.6% followed by Germany, Italy and the UK at around 11%. Personal stores in America have decreased to 4% and in

Canada

at a very low 1.9%.

According to

the chart,

Canada

shows the lowest rate in 2000 compared to 1970 and 1990. The

overall

trend displays a reduction in reserves in

this

thirty-year period. And

also

accumulation has increased in the UK compared to the past twenty years.

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