You have just moved into a new home and are plannig to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter . introduce yourself . discribe your plans for the party . invite your neibourhour to come

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Dear Hadia, I am organising a party for a new home celebration. Let me introduce myself first I shifted recently and live next to your home.

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, after buying a new semi-attached home I am planning a grand party for my family and friends.

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, to understand the function it is important to discuss it with you so that you don't disturb it. The event will start at 7 pm on the 1st

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because it week a day everyone can come easily.

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, a buffet dinner is planned at 9 pm with various dishes.

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, on my friend's recommendation, I have booked a local eminent and he will perform at 10 pm.

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function distrubs you a lot but it will end within 1 hour so that you can sleep

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function. If it is possible please join

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party so that I will be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely,

mobinadurrani43Sun Oct 29 2023

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task achievement

Make sure to explicitly mention that you have just moved into a new home to provide context for the party.

coherence cohesion

The logical flow of the letter is generally clear, but try to separate the introduction of yourself and your plans for the party into separate paragraphs.

lexical resource

Use more varied and precise vocabulary to describe your plans for the party.

grammatical range

Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar errors, such as missing articles and incorrect verb tenses.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

161 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are plannig to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter . introduce yourself . discribe your plans for the party . invite your neibourhour to come

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