The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The table gives information about the
price
of water in 5 cities in Australia which are divided in
2 categories Change the preposition
into
such
as up to 125KL and over 125KL, as well as
the average bill in
every house.
Change preposition
for
Overall
, it is clearly seen that based on the average bill per house, the water in Perth is the most expensive, while
the cheapest water is in Melbourne
.
To begin
with, the fee for usage change per kiloliter starting from zero to up 125
kiloliter Change preposition
to 125
cost
the highest in Sydney, with 0.98 Wrong verb form
costs
dollars
per kilo, followed by Brisbane with 0.81 dollars
per kilo, and in Melbourne
with 0.78 dollars
. Adelaide and Perth have the same price
and are the cheapest among other cities, which is 0.42 dollars
per kilo.
On the other hand
, the various prices for usage more
than 125 per kiloliter Change preposition
of more
also
applied. With 1.50 Add a missing verb
are also
dollars
per liter
, Perth holds the highest Change the spelling
litre
price
in this
category, followed by Adelaide with 1.00 dollars
per liter
. Sydney, Brisbane, and Change the spelling
litre
Melbourne
still maintain the low price
below 1 dollars
, with 0.98 Change to a singular noun
dollar
dollars
for sydney
, 0.84 Change the capitalization
Sydney
dollars
for Brisbane, and 0.78 dollars
for Melbourne
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