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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

#countries #phone #cellphone #apps #development
In recent decades with
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developing
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 of technology and
Internet
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the Internet
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 .the payment process become more used than the old methods
.in
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In
this
 essay I will discuss the merits of it. The first
merits
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merit
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 of using mobile phone
app
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apps
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 in
this
fast paced
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 -society is a faster process of payment by
click
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 on the bottom of the phone screen.
Secondly
 giving opportunities for shopping from universal
website
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websites
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 like Amazon just Paying online .
Furthermore
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 it is more useful for the fathers and
parent
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parents
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 who don’t like going marketplace with their Family so they can stay at home and pay for them
instead
 of going with them
Consequently
,preserving money on apps application are more safe from stolen
rather
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than
have
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 1 million cash in your pocket.
On the other hand
, all
generation
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generations
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 like our grandparents prefer to have a
much
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lot of
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 money on their
hand
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hands
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 and I do not believe the application app and
this
 technology In
nutshell
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 , The pros outweigh the cons of using a mobile application for
payment
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the payment
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 process.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • security
  • time-saving
  • cashless transactions
  • dependence on technology
  • privacy concerns
  • accessibility issues
  • financial vulnerability
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