Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

#friend #drive #advice #licence #school #guidance #tips

Hi David, I hope that you are well. How are your studies going? I was glad when I received your email about learning a new skill. Since I knew that you are trying to learn

car

driving I was pleased to hear about it.

However

, it's essential is drive a

car

for everyone.

Besides

this

, before driving on the road it's important to have a licence. If you have a licence

then

it is possible not to get a fine.

Moreover

, more job opportunities are opened for

car

drivers and after training you can apply. I suggest you join a training institute for driving because it's good to practice before on the road. Whenever drive a

car

you can

along with

your friend who knows how to drive. Before driving on the street make sure your

car

wheels are in good condition.

While

driving all attention on the road, if you aren't aware of

this

thing it's probably you can do accident. I anticipate your efforts in driving practice. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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task achievement

Ensure that you fully address all the points mentioned in the prompt. In this case, you have addressed the advantages of having a driving license, recommended a driving school, and given extra guidance/tips. Well done!

coherence cohesion

Try to improve the overall organization and coherence of your ideas. Develop a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Additionally, make sure that each paragraph presents a single main idea and is connected logically to the previous and following paragraphs.

lexical resource

Expand your range of vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately and effectively. Use synonyms, idiomatic expressions, and varied sentence structures to make your writing more interesting.

grammatical range

Work on improving your grammar accuracy and range. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tenses, articles, and sentence structure.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

178 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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