Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips
Hi David,
I hope that you are well. How are your studies going? I was glad when I received your email about learning a new skill.
Since I knew that you are trying to learn
car
driving I was pleased to hear about it. However
, it's essential is drive a car
for everyone. Besides
this
, before driving on the road it's important to have a licence. If you have a licence then
it is possible not to get a fine. Moreover
, more job opportunities are opened for car
drivers and after training you can apply.
I suggest you join a training institute for driving because it's good to practice before on the road. Whenever drive a car
you can along with
your friend who knows how to drive. Before driving on the street make sure your car
wheels are in good condition. While
driving all attention on the road, if you aren't aware of this
thing it's probably you can do accident. I anticipate your efforts in driving practice.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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task achievement
Ensure that you fully address all the points mentioned in the prompt. In this case, you have addressed the advantages of having a driving license, recommended a driving school, and given extra guidance/tips. Well done!
coherence cohesion
Try to improve the overall organization and coherence of your ideas. Develop a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Additionally, make sure that each paragraph presents a single main idea and is connected logically to the previous and following paragraphs.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately and effectively. Use synonyms, idiomatic expressions, and varied sentence structures to make your writing more interesting.
grammatical range
Work on improving your grammar accuracy and range. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tenses, articles, and sentence structure.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,