some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, some
people
believe that if we make the minimum legal
age
up for driving anything we will improve
road
safety
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will draw my personal conclusion. On the one hand, the
people
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with that
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think
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young
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road
rule
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such
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Moreover
, they
also
believe maybe if all young
people
drive
they will have a lot of
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and traffic
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the
road
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the street without
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if there
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or not.
However
, they want the government
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the minimum legal
age
as soon as because they think the
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age
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don't understand everything about
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disagree with
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think it's
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age
of the minimum legal
age
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older
people
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and that
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no
reason to increase the
age
of driving.
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idea to improve
road
safety
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as
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a hard test driving for all of them.
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are a lot of family waiting
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chaild
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child
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in minimum legal
age
for driving because maybe they have some
problem
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and they cannot
drive
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, they believe the government should put a hard rule for
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drive
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as
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someone
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up the speed limit they should take
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driving
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license
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them
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and
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that suggestion to avoid
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the minimum legal
age
for driving and
they
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will improve
road
safety
.
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conclusion, in my
opinion
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I disagree with that
think
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.
Moreover
, I think they can
drive
very well than older.
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,
i
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believe they can do it if the government give them some class about
road
safety
and they will understand.
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