You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the highest educational degree earned by King City residents, and the average household size in King City from 1950 - 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the educational
degree
earned by the inhabitants of King City between the years 1950 and 2000. While the
second graph depicts the Correct word choice
The
overall
trend in the mean household size in King City during the same timeframe. Overall
, the residents earning a high school
degree
and the average household size faced a similar trend over the years. In both cases, tIll 1990, the numbers declined after which the lines plateaued.
As seen evidently from the first graph, the number
of people
finishing up a college degree
and the number
of people
who have earned a Post-graduate degree
have risen from 1950 to 2000, by approximately 35% and 10%. Conversely
, the number
of residents with no high school
degree
or only a high school
degree
faced a decline by
approximately 10% and 40%. An Change preposition
of
intresting
feature is thatCorrect your spelling
interesting
,
inhabitants having no high Remove the comma
apply
school
degree
and the ones earning a post-graduate degree
had opposite trends throughout the year. SImilarly
, Correct your spelling
Similarly
people
earning a high school
degree
and people
earning a college degree
also
had opposite trends throughout the years.
In concluion
, from 1950 to 2000, the household size Correct your spelling
conclusion
reduced
by 1 unit. Add a missing verb
was reduced
Additionally
, the number
of inhabitants without a degree
or only a high school
degree
also
reduced in numbers.Submitted by vani13padmakumar on
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