You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the highest educational degree earned by King City residents, and the average household size in King City from 1950 - 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  

The charts below show the highest educational degree earned by King City residents, and the average household size in King City from 1950 - 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the educational
degree
earned by the inhabitants of King City between the years 1950 and 2000.
While the
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second graph depicts the
overall
trend in the mean household size in King City during the same timeframe.
Overall
, the residents earning a high
school
degree
and the average household size faced a similar trend over the years. In both cases, tIll 1990, the numbers declined after which the lines plateaued. As seen evidently from the first graph, the
number
of
people
finishing up a college
degree
and the
number
of
people
who have earned a Post-graduate
degree
have risen from 1950 to 2000, by approximately 35% and 10%.
Conversely
, the
number
of residents with no high
school
degree
or only a high
school
degree
faced a decline
by
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of
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approximately 10% and 40%. An
intresting
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interesting
feature is that
,
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inhabitants having no high
school
degree
and the ones earning a post-graduate
degree
had opposite trends throughout the year.
SImilarly
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Similarly
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,
people
earning a high
school
degree
and
people
earning a college
degree
also
had opposite trends throughout the years. In
concluion
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conclusion
, from 1950 to 2000, the household size
reduced
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by 1 unit.
Additionally
, the
number
of inhabitants without a
degree
or only a high
school
degree
also
reduced in numbers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words degree, school, number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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