Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe it is best to accept a bad
situation
, such
as an unsatisfactory job
or a shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such
situations
. Some people are forced to accept a bad experience, believing these bad situations
can be an opportunity to learn something new. In my experience, I willingly accept the negative situations
in life and take that opportunity as a learning curve in my life.
Some individuals believe that accepting bad situations
will allow a person to learn new things in the long run. For instance
, if a school leaver gets a job
, he or she has to start from the lowest level of employment due to
lack of experience and necessary knowledge. The stress level might be exhausting, but in the long run, it can benefit his/her career in the long term. The bad and good experiences can be valuable lessons added to their life and career pathways. Hence
, this
explains why some people choose to accept bad experiences in their lives.
Besides
accepting a bad situation
, some argue that trying and improving such
situations
is better. For example
, if a person’s goal is to be a photographer, he/she is forced to do an accounting job
to maintain a social status or due to
force from the family. It can lead to stress issues and dissatisfaction with their job
. In such
a situation
, that individual can mitigate to improve their mental stability by doing what he or she loves. It is better to discuss with family or friends and come to a solution rather than suffer mentally and physically. In my opinion, I strongly suggest that one can choose to act in both situations
according to
the situations
when facing a problem and think of the best solution to solve it. If the situation
requires you to ignore it, then
do so. There is no need to figure out how to improve those situations
as it will take your time and cause stress. However
, if the situation
requires you to take action quickly, by all means, do so, as you might not know the consequences if You ignore the problem.
In conclusion, when facing bad situations
, the most important thing is to analyze the problem, and then
only you can react to it. Not all bad situations
need to be ignored, and not all need to be improved. Think wisely to get the best solution for all of your problems.Submitted by shazraibrahimphotography2 on
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