The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car
The pie charts illustrate the different types of causes of
people
who are using cycle
or Fix the agreement mistake
cycles
car
to job. Fix the agreement mistake
cars
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the chart that, due to
health and fitness and less pollution are the main Change preposition
apply
reason
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reasons
of
employees prefer to use Change preposition
apply
cycle
. Correct article usage
a cycle
On the other hand
, comfort is the main reason behind using car
to commute.
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a car
the car
To begin
with, 13 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
consider no cost while
they are using cycle
. At the same Correct article usage
a cycle
time
the least number of employees think cycling is faster than Add a comma
time,
car
, which is 12 percent
. When it comes to health and pollution,a large number of people
prefer cycle
, at 30 Add the particle
to cycle
percent
each. Only 15% think that using Change the spelling
per cent
cycle
is not a problem for parking. Correct article usage
a cycle
Nevertheless
, in terms of using vehicle
for commute distance is the second greatest chunk. It accounts for around one-fifth. Consideration of reaching faster than Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
cycle
and needs
to carry things to work remain same, which is 14 Wrong verb form
needing
percent
. The least number of Change the spelling
per cent
people
think it is safer than cycle
. To be precise 11 percent
. The major reason why job holders use car
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cars
for
their comfort.Add a missing verb
is for
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