The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car
The two provided pie charts illustrate the reasons why people decide to bike rather than drive to work.
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individuals
has preferred driving Change to a singular noun
individual
than
cycling Change preposition
over
due to
their comfortable things and it might be faster compared to the other staff.
Looking into the details, it can be seen that 30 Linking Words
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percent
preferred cycling for health and fitness; another side effect was the same amount of pollution, from which it can be concluded that it has less impact on the environment. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, 15 Linking Words
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of each individual complained that no parking areas were being provided. Nearly 12 to 13 Change the spelling
per cent
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said the advantage of biking was that it was less expensive and faster than driving.
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On the other hand
, 40 Linking Words
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percent
of respondents preferred driving because it was Change the spelling
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most
comfortable. Almost 21 Correct article usage
the most
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per cent
give
the reason that the distance to work was quite far from their accommodation areas. 11 to 14 Wrong verb form
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preferred Change the spelling
per cent
this
because it was easier to carry things than biking, and the other two reasons were that it was safer and faster than cycling.Linking Words
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