The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car

The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car
The two provided pie charts illustrate the reasons why people decide to bike rather than drive to work.
Overall
, the average of each
individuals
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has preferred driving
than
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cycling
due to
their comfortable things and it might be faster compared to the other staff. Looking into the details, it can be seen that 30
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preferred cycling for health and fitness; another side effect was the same amount of pollution, from which it can be concluded that it has less impact on the environment.
Furthermore
, 15
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of each individual complained that no parking areas were being provided. Nearly 12 to 13
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said the advantage of biking was that it was less expensive and faster than driving.
On the other hand
, 40
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of respondents preferred driving because it was
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comfortable. Almost 21
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give
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the reason that the distance to work was quite far from their accommodation areas. 11 to 14
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preferred
this
because it was easier to carry things than biking, and the other two reasons were that it was safer and faster than cycling.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commute
  • sustainable
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • carbon footprint
  • fuel expenses
  • parking availability
  • gridlock
  • mass transit
  • individual choice
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