The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events
The given table illustrates different reasons for people's desire to attend art events in the UK. The data was taken in the period from the
last
20 years
to today and considered four different purposes, such
as accompanying children
, special celebrations, work, and the desire to see a specific performer.
Overall
, through the years
, the desire to see special artists has been the most popular reason and always has a mark of around 56%, which means more than half of people in the UK are interested in this
type of reason. At the same time, according to
the results of the study, work and accompanying children
have an absolutely positive tendency, and their percentage grows every decade. Only special occasions have a consistently negative trend.
If considered in more detail, accompanying children
was 9% 20 years
ago and increased by 6% and 9% in the points 10 years
ago and today, respectively. Approximately the same tendency has "work" , it started from the mark of 6% two decades ago and went up to 10% and 11% in the next two next 20 years
. However
, it is the biggest indicator is only 2 per cent more than the smallest of special events. Also
, the marks in the points of two past decades are much bigger than indicators of "job" and accompanying children
in the same period of time, and got 27%(20 years
ago) and 20%(10 years
ago) .Submitted by aisha.alen99 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, children with synonyms.
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