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untilage
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until age
until
further
it will be discussed.
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one
hand Correct article usage
the one
education
can provide quality life to Use synonyms
individual
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an individual
the individual
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students
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hence
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age
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certificates to follow course modules.Use synonyms
Further
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Otherwise
they will be shamed by the society. Moving ahead children could be able to learn vast Add a comma
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knowledge, skills, behaviours and Correct your spelling
academic
also
good sharing qualities which help to find a good job through the maximum schooling time.As Linking Words
a
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example
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example,
provide
free Change the verb form
provides
education
until Use synonyms
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age
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the age
18
for Change preposition
of 18
evey
student. Correct your spelling
every
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it is important to take that opportunity to polish Linking Words
childrens'
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children's
personality
.
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personalities
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, people can argue that it is a waste of time and not necessary to attend Linking Words
school
until maximum Use synonyms
age
. Use synonyms
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I believe it is good to take time to develop their talents and find a career which is Correct word choice
apply
relevent
to that field. So for that it is not necessary to attend Correct your spelling
relevant
school
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untill
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until
age
18. Use synonyms
Infact
, in Sri Lanka there are lots of writers who won Correct your spelling
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medels
for their writing. Among them majority have Correct your spelling
medals
models
primary level
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primary-level
school
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education
.Use synonyms
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they are not Add a comma
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loosing
their particular field of interest.Not only that students can learn from their parents, relatives, neighbours and society. Correct your spelling
losing
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children can decide whether they want to go to Linking Words
school
or not.But in some countries like Sri Use synonyms
Lanka
it is a Add a comma
Lanka,
compulsary
manner by law. Correct your spelling
compulsory
Government
is always monitoring it. not only that it is prohibited to get work done by students who are below Correct article usage
The government
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age
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the age
18
by law.
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of 18
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must
to attend Correct article usage
a must
school
until Use synonyms
age
18. Other than that it is not necessary to follow because there are lots of paths Use synonyms
as well as
opportunities in the world.Linking Words
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