Schooling is a part of every
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life to uplift knowledge and skills.
However
,It is argued that everybody should stay at
school
18.It is hard to disregard the topic.I partially agree with the given notion and
further
it will be discussed.
InChange preposition
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oneCorrect article usage
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hand
education
can provide quality life to
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an individual
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person.There are some requirements to select
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jobs in the world.in
to become a doctor
studentFix the agreement mistake
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should learn bioscience at
school
,
hence
should attend
school
until
age
18.Not only that the jobs
such
as
,lawyer and teacher need that much level of
education
certificates to follow course modules.
Further
,to gain social recognition and reputation students should attend classes as much as possible.
they will be shamed by the society. Moving ahead children could be able to learn vast
knowledge, skills, behaviours and
also
good sharing qualities which help to find a good job through the maximum schooling time.As
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Sri Lanka
provideChange the verb form
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free
education
until
ageCorrect article usage
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18Change preposition
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for
student.
Therefore
it is important to take that opportunity to polish
childrens'Change noun form
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personalityFix the agreement mistake
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.
On the other hand
, people can argue that it is a waste of time and not necessary to attend
school
until maximum
age
.
some people have born skills to dance, sing, play, cook, and fix something.
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I believe it is good to take time to develop their talents and find a career which is
to that field. So for that it is not necessary to attend
school
age
18.
, in Sri Lanka there are lots of writers who won
for their writing. Among them majority have
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school
education
.
they are not
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their particular field of interest.Not only that students can learn from their parents, relatives, neighbours and society.
Hence
children can decide whether they want to go to
school
or not.But in some countries like Sri
it is a
manner by law.
GovernmentCorrect article usage
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is always monitoring it. not only that it is prohibited to get work done by students who are below
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18Change preposition
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by law.
To conclude
,I think that to achieve a white colour job with recognition it is
mustCorrect article usage
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to attend
school
until
age
18. Other than that it is not necessary to follow because there are lots of paths
as well as
opportunities in the world.