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The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activitiies among European adults in 1985 and 1995

The pie charts below show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activitiies among European adults in 1985 and 1995
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The two pie charts illustrate data regarding the outcomes of research into the popularity of diverse spare activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Generally speaking, it is readily apparent that watching TV is supposed to be the most choice of leisure items. First off, the percentage of
taking
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talking
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 with family members faced a steep and
constants
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 decrease in the given temporal internal, which from 18% dropped to 7%,
while
more
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reduction
is
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in
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 the proportion of dining out in free
times
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, which declined 15%. At the same time, other
of
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leisure activities
other
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had a
slighting
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 diminishing for old people and middle-aged groups, with from 6% became 2%.
On the other hand
, the biggest free time
activities
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activity
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 is watching TV in 1995, which was occupying 30%, compared with before, it had a lightly decrease. Meanwhile, the proportion of
the
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talking with family saw a rise,
which
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taking up 26%, compared to
the
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1985, it has increased by 5%.
In particular
, in 1995, there was a way of playing computer games, which
account
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 for 27%
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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