Some poeple say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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with friends. So they care about
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everything
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home
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our feeling.
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our health to stay in
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place
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area could be the best
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our mental health. But , others have different reasons for do not
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about
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organised
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cleanliness
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their places. lack of time or
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money
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product
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in
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people to
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good ideas and be more creative , feel stable and calm, they
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already knows everything located in
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or
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stress
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conclusion
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care and
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you're
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and
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place
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foucs
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focus
, productivity and even the
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environment
around you.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tidy
  • organised
  • correct place
  • sense of order
  • calmness
  • promote
  • enhance
  • productivity
  • efficiency
  • accidents
  • safety
  • locate
  • clutter-free
  • stress
  • mental well-being
  • professionalism
  • impression
  • cleaning
  • organizing
  • dust
  • dirt
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