Some people think TV is good for us while others think that TV has many disadvantage. Discuss both views.
In modern times
TV
has become an integral part of our lives. There are some arguments that it does not have only advantages but disadvantages as well. this
essay is going to discuss both opinions.
First of all, the biggest disadvantage is TV
addiction and its negative impact on people especially
kids. They spend too much time in front of Add the comma(s)
, especially
television
and Add an article
the television
a television
as a result
, it leads to both health problems and sedentary
life. Correct article usage
a sedentary
For example
, they begin to watch some programmes
, and soap operas and spend several hours watching them eventually it becomes a comfort zone for them. In the end, it becomes a harmful habit.
Secondly
, there are several advantages of TV
as a source of information and education. Recently many educational, informative TV
programmes
have been shown on television. it has a great impact on people's world outlook such
as promoting cultural awareness. for example
, there are some programmes
about historical facts of different countries from modern times till ancient times. All this
only has beneficial sides for people.
In conclusion, TV
plays an important role in our lives. We should balance watching time and carefully choose programmes
which we consider will improve us in several ways.Submitted by arzu.shahbazova1 on
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In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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