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level. Electronie machines

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being used increasingly in

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education

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how machines

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For us and our new generation. (Paragraph #1) First and

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foremost

, trainees learn

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universities

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laptop

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who learn easily and

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computerization

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problems: (conclusion) To

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sum up

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computerization

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survive

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in the world and these have Few drawbacks Government should have to

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