It is easier for wealthy people to maintain good health than it is for people who don’t have large amounts of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and include relevant examples.

There is an assumption that it is a piece of cake for the rich to maintain their

fitness

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compared to

people

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with lower financial status. These poor

people

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struggle to buy fresh

food

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,

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to the

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for maintaining

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their well-being. Personally, these crystal clear obstacles could be removed easily by wealthy individuals. The main significant obstacle to

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healthy

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a healthy

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life is

insufficient

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an insufficient

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amount of fresh vegetables and

fruits

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consumption. When these

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food

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foods

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consumed enough, individuals can easily absorb essential

vitamins

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and minerals into their bodies. To illustrate

this

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, healthcare professionals suggest various

of

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apply

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food

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, preferably fresh

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vegetables, to digest crucial

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for the human body. These digested

vitamins

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and minerals provide an appropriate environment for human enzymes, functioning as

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structures.

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, those who can afford

for

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apply

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fresh goods

are be

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able to improve their

fitness

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. Eventually, the poor might be challenged to invest enough money to buy some fresh

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. Since some citizens could struggle to invest

their

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diet, another problem is creating a budget for a

gym

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membership. Despite the fact that you do not have to go to

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gym

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the gym

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to improve neither endurance nor

fitness

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, it will be really easy

with going

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to a

gym

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frequently. These

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centers

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are highly effective, having machines for burning fat, because they provide a space for doing exercises.

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, treadmills are a good type of machinery to lose weight during cold weather outside in winter.

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wealthy individuals could subscribe to a

gym

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easily, it could be hard for those poor

people

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. In conclusion, it is claimed that the rich can keep their

fitness

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level conveniently through

reaching

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fresh

food

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and going to a

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compared to the poor. Definitely,

people

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with low financial status could struggle to maintain their

well-beings

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. They might not be able to benefit from

fitness

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centers

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or adequate

vitamins

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and minerals.