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Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions? What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

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Introduction
The causes
about
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plaiarism
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plagiarism
 in academics have many ways to
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Body · 1
Firsty
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First
,people do not
belived
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believe
believed
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been
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 punished
on
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for
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plagiarism
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secondly
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,
student
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students
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 may have too high
pressure
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a pressure
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 to perform well academically.
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, they have
another values
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 about
plaiarism
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plagiarism
 in academics.
Becouse
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Because
everybaby
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every baby
everybody
 go
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 ,if they do not do it . they will lose a lot of
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they
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 life.The only way to go is
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Body · 2
So,the possible
solutions
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 must
to
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 fix it.
Fristy
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First
,
educational
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the educational
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 system need to make
student
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the student
a student
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 understand why they
could not
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cannot
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plaiarism
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plagiarise
. And
the
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some time,
educational
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the educational
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 system should punish hard for
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the student
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student
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students
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,who
plagiarism
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 in
acadmics
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academics
.
secondly
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, make people critical thinking about why
plagiarism
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 is a problem.
Conclusion
Finally
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,
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researchers
researcher
reresearcher
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the reresearcher
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 just
need
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 to quote or make
a references
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a reference
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,
what
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 they get about the information.
it
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 will not be a big problem any more

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Task Response
Ensure that you fully address both parts of the question in your essay. You mentioned the causes of plagiarism but did not provide any specific solutions.
Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the logical structure of your essay. The ideas presented do not flow smoothly and some sentences are difficult to understand.
Lexical Resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. Some words and phrases are used repeatedly.
Grammatical Range
Work on your grammatical accuracy. There are several grammatical errors and incorrect word forms in your essay.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plagiarism
  • academic integrity
  • ethical issue
  • intellectual property
  • citation
  • referencing
  • academic misconduct
  • originality
  • ethical standards
  • unfair advantage
  • ethical guidelines
  • punitive measures
  • deterrence
  • academic dishonesty
  • critical thinking
  • time management
  • peer pressure
  • educational system
  • inadequate consequences
  • disciplinary action
  • information literacy
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