The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015. (million students)
This
graph depicts the average number of students studying abroad in France, Russia, and America over 15 years.
Overall
, this
figure experienced an upward trend. While
there was a gradual increase in America, the opposite could be seen in the others.
Standing at 1.5 million
, the least Vietnamese who choose
to study abroad was allocated to the Wrong verb form
chose
U.S
in 2000, Correct your spelling
U.S.
whereas
the most belonged to France with 3.5 million
. This
number witnessed a gradual increase of 5 million
which was double the lowest, from 2000 to 2015. Similarly
, before sharply increasing to 4.5 million
at the end
of the observed period, the number of students going to France decreased by 1 million
then
remained stable at 2.5 Correct word choice
and then
million
for 5 years.
On the other hand
, after having a slight increase of 2.5 million
in 2015, students going to Russia decreased by 1 million
over 10 years, which was the lowest.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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