The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Both diagrams show the transformation of Liveton docks between 1980 and now.
Overall
, It can be clearly seen that after the renovation, the functions were changed to be more activities center than before concluding 2 types of structures which are new buildings and converted buildings.
To begin
with, the warehouses were converted into education centers
, kid's playing areas, and apartments respectively. Change the spelling
centres
In addition
, the space between these 3 constructions and 2 cranes, the sailing club, hotel, and parking has been developed
The most noticeable additions are ships in the canal. there was transformed into a ship museum while
another 3 were removed.
The Liveton docks have been changed from the place keeping or repairing ships into a place that can support many modern activities. The circulation structures were built to connect each of these buildings together, however
, a flood barrier was constructed in the East to protect the flood problem from the coast.Submitted by nine318 on
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