The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
The
lines
graph presents information regarding Change the noun form
line
total
number of Change the article
a total
the total
students
who enrolled at Sheffield
University
from 3 differences
Replace the word
different
country
Iranian, Greek and TurkishFix the agreement mistake
countries
during
2005 Change preposition
from
till
2009.
In general, there Change preposition
to
always are
Wrong verb form
have been
students
abroad enrolled at Sheffield
University
between 2005 and 2009 from Iran
, Greece
and Turkey
. Students
Abroad from Iran
and Turkey
consistently go up every single year.
Although
always any
Correct quantifier usage
apply
students
enrolled at Sheffield
University
, there is
any differencesChange the verb form
are
of
Change preposition
in
total
Correct article usage
the total
students
abroad from each country. The peak Correct quantifier usage
number of students
student
who enrolled at Fix the agreement mistake
number of students
Sheffield
University
from both of
Change preposition
apply
Iran
and Turkey
happened at
2009. Change preposition
in
Total
Correct article usage
A total
160
Change preposition
of 160
students
from Iran
and 120 students
from Turkey
enrolled for
Change preposition
at
Sheffield
University
at
2009. The opposite of Change preposition
on
Iran
and Turkey
, students
from Correct article usage
the students
Greece
always go
down every single year Wrong verb form
went
start
Wrong verb form
starting
at
2005 until 2009. As Change preposition
from
Correct article usage
a results
results
Fix the agreement mistake
result
from
Change preposition
of
this
data, peak
year of Correct article usage
the peak
students
abroad who enrolled at Sheffield
University
from Greece
happened at
2005 and both Change preposition
in
of
Change preposition
apply
Iran
and Greece
occur
Wrong verb form
occurred
at
2009.Change preposition
in
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